The Mud Run

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When I first got in the mud run I cried because I got stuck. One of the adults got me out but Mrs Lediard made me go back in the mud. When I got back in the mud I could feel the sticky, icky mud stuck between my toes. When I got on a log I had to drag my butt across it. Once again I got stuck. My foot got stuck in between a stick. Hazel R had to dig my feet out of the mud but it didn't work out. Chloe dragged me out of the mud and it hurt my legs. I grabbed the rope and pulled and the adults pulled me out of the mud. I wobbled and tobbled out of the mud run and said luckily I made it out alive.

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  1. AnonymousNovember 13, 2018 at 3:17 PM

    Hi Sarah. Did you have fun on the mud run? I did not know how many times you went through the mud run.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 13, 2018 at 5:42 PM

    Hi Sarah
    I like how you have hooked me into your piece of writing.You gave me a cool picture in my head. Did you have fun?

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  3. AnonymousNovember 15, 2018 at 2:52 PM

    Hi Sarah
    I like your writing because you hooked the reader in. Did you like the mud run.I hated it because it smelt really bad.

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  4. AnonymousNovember 15, 2018 at 5:35 PM

    Hi Sarah
    Did you like the mud run? I didn't it smells really bad right. I never want to do it ever again.

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  5. AnonymousNovember 20, 2018 at 1:31 PM

    Hi Sarah
    Did you like the mud run? I think that was the best day of my life. I wish we could do it again.

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  6. AnonymousNovember 28, 2018 at 5:24 PM

    Hi Sarah
    Sarah why is the top of you not muddy? I had mud every were even places that I did not even know eww!! It is all over phew!

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  7. AnonymousDecember 10, 2018 at 3:19 PM

    Hi Sarah
    Did you like the mud run?I did, I went around the mud run 2 times. How many times did you do it?

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  8. AnonymousAugust 8, 2019 at 2:53 PM

    Hi Sarah
    ahh!!! You look so muddy!
    I know you have been to the mud run but it's so muddy!!
    You can check how muddy I was.I thought I was going to fall in.
    My Mom thought that I was missing, so I went back in the mud.
    Do you know that some people got scratches?

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2019 at 2:42 PM

    Hi Sarah.
    I got you out the first time. But your writing about the second time when couldn't get you out (corection)✔💁
    How was it like the rest of trip?

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2019 at 5:07 PM

    Hi Sarah
    Ahh!!! You look so muddy! I went there and I hated it so much. I see you went lots of time, I only went once. Did you have a good time at camp because I did. Nice that you liked the mud run Sarah.

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